Tremble as i wake!

just another one of my poems !!!!!!!!

    My eye's tremble as i wake, 

For i see the world as it really is, 

The world is so cold, 

How can that be, 

My fear of you makes me tremble, 

The fear of you, 

Makes me never wanna wake, 

The love for you is so harsh, 

Wake me when the lights turn bright again, 

Just want love, 

Just want to be loved, 

Feels as if no one cares, 

Is there really true love out there?

Author's Note

let me know what you think !

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I think this is one that a lot of us can relate to.. it is simple yet heartfelt and honest.. it feels "real".. most of us would love to just love and be loved.. we question if "true love" is really "out there"... the fear of more pain, heartache, and rejection haunts us.. well done..

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review