I feel so numb!

just another poem with feelings coming out !

  I feel so numb, 

Oh so numb, 

What have i become, 

I feel so lost, 

Oh so lost, 

I feel regret, 

I feel pain and agony, 

Feel as life has been beating me down, 

The drugs, 

The sorrow, 

Oh what have i become.

Author's Note

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[MomzillaNC]

Wailing agains the fall…

NOTES: "Oh what have i become." The poetic license of using the lowercase personal pronoun could be very profound; but it needs further development in the preceding lines to really make the impact deliberate.

[M.A.Rathore]

Short and sweet verse springs up
As you feel life after having a cup
Of wine and drug putting inside
A gust of poetic air blows in pride
-M.A.Rathore