Feel your pain!

well just a poem coming from the heart again !

   I feel so lost,

I feel your pain, 

It's so sad, 

I feel what you can feel, 

I see what you can see, 

I hear what you hear, 

I'm walking in your shoes, 

I feel oh so terrified, 

It's hard to trust anyone, 

I have so much hate, 

I have so much anger built up inside of me, 

SO much pain, 

So many tears, 

Feel as if your going over the edge, 

Can't remember anything, 

My memories are oh so gone, 

I wanna remember, 

But i can't remember, 

The pain i feel, 

I hate the pain , 

Tried to die, 

Tried to get away, 

But nothing worked, 

I wanna run away, 

But the fear of life is in my way, 

So let's just go smoke it all away, 

Let's do some drugs, 

Let's drink, 

It'll wash all the pain away, 

And all the fears, 

So let's just give up on everything and say good by.

Author's Note

ok some of this poem is about me but not all of it ... let me know what you think

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Very emotional expression of empathy.

NOTES: It should be "…and say [goodbye]."
Strictly defined meter and rhyme aren't required for poetry. However, a balanced meter helps the flow of poetic lines; maybe your longer lines should be broken down into two lines. Also, I think this one could benefit from being set out in stanzas.

[M.A.Rathore]

Wonderful expression sprung up afar
Chasing the excellent feel breaking bar
Ideas come through your disturbed mind
Joys and sorrows together all you bind
-M.A.Rathore

[hardeep sabharwal]

nicely expressed poem, a good read, and emotional,
good job