Hopelessly lost!

well just a random poem i wrote

    I feel so empty, 

I feel so broken, 

I feel as if my heart has been broken down so many times, 

I love you, 

I love you oh so dearly, 

My hope has become oh so numb, 

I miss the old times, 

The fun times, 

Your the greatest of them all, 

But i feel as if my heart has been ripped out so many times, 

I feel so empty, 

I feel so lost, 

I feel so dull, 

Feel as if drugs is my last hope, 

Wanna get drunk, 

Let's party, 

It'll eat away all the pain, 

I feel oh so sad and lost, 

But i love you so much, 

It would hurt if we left each other, 

Love me till the day is gone

Author's Note

what do you think

Reviews

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Ok..so be it...love till the day is gone... :) ... kidding

I liked the flow of sentiment, ecpecially the resolutions in the ending lines after an emotion. That is what we really think sometimes - drug and alcohol to overcome the pain.

All in all, I felt someone wrote me a hug.

[Sami Khalil]

A very powerful sentiments you share with us. A good write...:)............

[M.A.Rathore]

As it is a poetic short hand expressed in deep and thought provoking way to be felt....nice just love the way...