Box car!

kids poem !

    If i dad to live in a box car, 

Fist things first, 

I would have to fix it up with what ever i could find, 

I would make sure i had a bunch of cool stuff in my new home, 

I would make a living room, 

Also a kitchen in there, 

And a bedroom, 

Oh gee Oh wow, 

What a lovely box car, 

It would be a cool place to live, 

Would have lots of fun in there, 

What would you do with a box car if you had to live in one?

Author's Note

what do you think !

Reviews

[priya]

its cool...creative imagination...