Help the poor!

well just a creative poem i came up with !

   I feel as if the world isn't  round, 

Maybe it's square,

The world is full of hatred, 

Full of hungry people, 

Full of homeless kids, and parents, 

Why is the world so cruel, 

Why don't we just get up off our lazy butts and help someone in need, 

Yeah your poor, 

But there's even more people out there in the world with nothing, 

Their way poorer than you, 

They can't afford to feed their family's, 

They don't know when their next meal is, 

They live in a box for shelter, 

They huddle together for warmth at night, 

So next time you see someone in need please oh please help them. 

Author's Note

let me know what you think of this poem ...

Reviews

[priya]

its so beautiful and so true..people who have little are the happiest of all..they value emotions and relations more than anything else..and that is what makes them true humans... :)

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[priya]

my pleasure...