Mario has a suit case!

another one of them poems looking at the picture and seeing what i see and write my thoughts and turn it into a poem

     Mario has a suitcase, 

A suitcase full of shrooms,

Mario has a suitcase,

A suitcase full of leaves, 

Mario has a suitcase,

A suitcase full of grass, 

Mario has a suitcase, 

A suitcase full of pipes and lighters, 

Mario has a suitcase, 

A suitcase full of stars, 

Mario has a suitcase, 

A suitcase full of flowers, 

Mario has a suitcase, 

A suit case full of shrooms, 

Mario has a suitcase, 

A suitcase full of grass, 

But the biggest of them all Mario has a huge hammer in his case, 

So you better watch out next time you see Mario ... 

Author's Note

tell me what you thought i thought this would be funny ... its another one of my poems looking at trippy pictures and writing about it ..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. You left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nikki]

Mario has a lot of suitcases or a blinking object that morphs and when you open it whichever it is on is selected like the blocks on Mariocart..? Lmao at the last line. Cute. :)

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review ...

[Nikki]

You're welcome :)

[Avinash]

Mario will be flattered if he reads this poem for sure. I like passionate writing about characters which are close to your heart.

[B-poet]

A clever & funny poem about Mario's ill-advised intentions for anyone who crosses him in the future. Nice work. An interesting and funny poem. :)

[Fran Marie]

don't think Mario should have that hammer if he has been at those shrooms... Mario sounds dangerous ...and what's in Mario's pipe.. j/k neat poem

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review and yea its supose to be kind of funny because well its a trippy picture and ive been writing poems on trippy looking pictures

[Fran Marie]

You're welcome...I enjoyed reading it..