A cat in space!

thought i would have some fun .. looking at trippy pictures and writing poems about them... so this is just about a evil cat who lives in space

    A cat in space, 

With rainbow lazor eyes, 

Razor sharp teeth, 

Heart shaped nose, 

There is a cat in space, 

A cat who has dragons as body guards, 

Dragons with razor sharp teeth, 

Dragons with lighting shaped eyes, 

A very colorful planet around, 

A cat who is oh so evil, 

He will rip you to shreds in one bite,

There is a cat, 

A cat in space, 

He changes colors, 

Black to white, 

Everything in space changes colors, 

It is oh so beautiful,

But watch out for the cat in space

Author's Note

tell me what you thought of this poem im taking myself to a whole new universe lol
looking at tripping pictures turing them into poems

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Cute, it reminds me of the cat from Alice in Wonderland. He's cute yet mischievous.
Nice write!

[Kyline Freed]

It kinda sounds like the cat on Alice and Wonderland >.< Great job on the wording and pacing but I saw a couple grammar issues.

[Sophy Freebirds]

It was a real fun to read. :) i would just recommend one thing you have used the phrase razor sharp teeth twice. Instead of that you can use "with canines that dig deep". Its just a suggestion though..i hope you haven't made the cat in space your pet. I am sure she will be around chasing me for teasing.here canines :D. Lol keep writing

~Sophy

[hardeep sabharwal]

Nice imagination, an amusing read here, :)

[Nikki]

Sounds like 'My cat'- JackoffJill. >< I love the was the dragon's eyes were presented... I'd watch out for that kitty. lol

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[Nikki]

welcome :)

[Avinash]

The imagination and imagery both are quite amusing. The cats are mysterious animals. You never know what is going on inside their mind. I really enjoyed your poem.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

For some reason I felt like this would make a really funky song.
The imagery was great. Fun!

[yuki]

First thing that comes to mind is someone had to much skittles haha this is good great write :)

[K.N. Thorn]

A cute and silly poem I feel it needs a little work still.