Snow !

thought i might say a poem about snow ... since fall is here .. and winter comes next

   

'      Snow, snow, snow, 

You are so very white, 

You are so cold, 

You make all the birds disapere, 

You make all the animals hibernate, 

Oh how we have to put up with you , 

Snow, 

You make us freeze, 

Snow why cant you be warm and cuddly, 

Snow you can be fun, 

But your still so cold, 

Let's build a snowman, 

Snow you can bring us so much joy, 

Snow you are so terrible, 

You cause so many accidents, 

You cause frost bite, 

Oh snow, 

You can be so fun to, 

All we have to do is bundle up, 

Then let's go outside and play, 

Oh snow you are so great sometimes, 

How about a nice cup of hot coco.

Author's Note

let me know what you thought of my poem

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It will come. I like snow. Create a peace and the kids love the snow. I like your description of the snow and how the good days need some warm beverage. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Your style of writing is very charming. I enjoy the personification here.
The theme was fun. Nice work.