A girl who wants to turn everything around!

it's based upon me and my life

   I'm sitting here thing of when i was a little girl , 

You told me never to give up hope , 

Stay strong, 

Trust in God, 

You told me to be who i wanted to be , 

     I'm trying , Im trying , 

Then was a day where i gave up hope , and i started to fail , i got depressed , i got worried, i cried a lot, 

I turned my life upside down , 

Started skipping out on school , 

Getting into trouble , 

I wanted everything to end , 

Didn't want to be in school, 

But you told me that i had to stay , 

Till the day that i met the man of my dreams, 

He came into my life in a strange way , 

I fell in love with him , 

He was 26 years older than me , 

But i loved him oh so Farley much , 

Years went by , 

I started to fail , 

Guess i wasn't ready to be in a family , 

I tried oh so hard never to fail ,

My life goes by day by day , 

I love you man , 

I feel so bad for all the terrible things that i have done , 

Please forgive me , 

I know we can work this out, 

I love you so much , 

It breaks my heart , 

I feel so bad , Oh so bad, 

I wish that i could go back in time , 

And i wish that i could fix all the broken roads that i have put into my life , 

I wish i could take back all the bad things that i have caused , 

Man i love you so much , 

I never wanna loose you , 

I try so hard, 

I try my best , 

Hard times come and go , 

I never wanna let you go , 

For i love you oh so very much ,  

Author's Note

let me know what you think on this poem

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

I think we all have thought of this, 'If only I could go back in time". I believe everything we experience in life is because of the choices we make and some were destined to happen and is in the midst of those predestined times we find who we really are and what our purpose in life is. Thanks for sharing!

I enjoyed my read.

[Kyline Freed]

This was amazing! You did a great job with the wording

[jennifer little]

thanks for the review

[A Soap Mess Stories]

If only we could go back in time and fix our mistakes. . .but I guess we have to live with the mistakes and hopefully learn from them. . .painfully tragic. . .well done. . .

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem is tragic in a lot of ways. The words are straightforward and sincere.
There is a lot of grey area, but that adds to the imagery of it all. The mystery
of it all is like a thin fog. The fact that it is hard to see, makes the decisions that
may have been made differently a second time around more powerful.

[Laura Lynn]

Wow, this sounds mysterious. It is not everyone who falls in love with someone twenty-six years older, such are the contrasts of life and scenarios. I try to figure out what it is to be in love often. I have fallen in and out of love to what I perceive it to be and not to be and we do often love others, it is such a wonderful thing and a wonderful feeling; so wonderful, in fact, that we see no reason not to be in love.

[wordman]

a wonderful tribute to the man you love great job