winter

winter

A Poem by jennifer little
"

its about winter

"

     w- watery
        I- icey

          n- neat

               t- tree's

                  e- eat

                       r- rain

© 2013 jennifer little


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jennifer little
short

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An enjoyable poem along with its form...Bravo.........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting idea... I have always enjoyed the acrostic form, and it can be difficult to use this form and make a real impact. This shows a vivid and relatable image. My suggestion...you don't need the "w- watery", it would be better if you just wrote it "Watery"-- the first letter capitalization will spell your "word", and the flow will be better because the dashes won't cause the reader to pause. :) Otherwise...enjoyed this image! I love the winter...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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jennifer little
jennifer little

jackson, MI



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hi im jen i am a single mother of one daughter . i struggle from ptsd depression and anxiety . from being in abusive realationships . i enjoy the outdoors , nature swimming fishing camping boat.. more..

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