January

its about january

         J-A-U-A-R-Y

 

   January !

I hate it !

 

   TO much snow ,

To much ice,

   But the hot coco is nice,

 

 

 

      January ,

Can be fun,

 

    There's lot's to do out side,

   There's sledding , ice fishing , ice skating ,

Snow man , Snow angels , Then we can have a nice cup of hot coco 

 

   

 

 

      January ,

It's the first month of the year,

A new year has begun ,

Let's celabreate , and have some fun ,

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Some interesting ideas in this piece. I like the feelings that you eluded to...the cold, the activities, etc. I also like the idea of the "first month of the year" as a new beginning of sorts. I did feel that this one was a bit all over the place in terms of form and content--it felt more like a series of short pieces than one cohesive poem. I think you have some good bones that you could mold into something that flows a bit better. Keep writing!