I WISH

basically its about wishes

       I wish I were,

   I wish I might,

I wish I was rich ,

 

    I wish I was famouse ,

I wish all my dreams come true ,

I wish everything goes great,

 

 I wish I could climb a mountain ,

I wish all the tree's were green ,

I wish my life will become better ,

  OH how I wish my dream's come true....

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Saumya]

this is sweet small, simple and lovely......!!!!
welll done...!!!!
:)

[Ezel_Amaru]

A wish if one only , maybe a wink from a shiny star
I wish often ,
stare into the mirror and wonder were you are
A wish upon a smiling moon
For a lucky break and a fresh start
I wish , I wish haha Im wishing alot more often

Inspired by your poetry great work..

[Ravyne Hawke]

wishes.. the universe recently reminded me that we are what we think.. keeping wishing and working towards making them come true!

[Lily Mae]

I wish right along with you.. well said..xo :)

[Renée]

I wish I may ..I wish I might..have the wish i wish tonight...

[stars are far]

wishes !! umm they are dreams ..difficult ,,but i can tell you my point of view i think that what dont you get isnt something bad ..because sometimes you think you wish the best but if fact if you get it ..you wont be the best..will life will be umm worse maybe ,,, so not everything we dream of is the best,,but what we get is always the best..but we must know how to mange it ..
well done ,,, keep it up :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I feel the same way. Waiting for my wishes to come true too. :-)

[MandaBear]

Wishes are fun to have they keep things interesting. It is also fun when you can actually accomplish your dreams and then make new ones. Great poem and keep following your dreams!

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. Sometimes wishes are all we have. I like the positive and feel in the poem. I hope all your dreams and wishes come true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Emerald Seas]

Wishes are the beginning of goals to be pursued. You want to climb a mountain, do it! May I suggest Mt. Fuji - a spectacular climb :) Set your wishes and dreams to goals, and then plot a course toward achievement. Anything is possible, the only one to limit you... is you. Nicely penned thoughts.