I AM POEM !

it's basically suppose to be about I am and well you'll get it once you read it

 

 

 

 

         I am the most fairest of them all,

  I wonder why the tree's change color's ,

I hear the sound of your voice,

   I see the sun shine,

       I want to be rich,

   I am the most coolest of them all,

 

 

      I pretend that I am floating through the sky ,

 

I fed my dog his lunch,

 

    I touch your face,

 

  I worry you'll be for ever,

I cry because I am sad ,

I am the most jolliest of them all,

 

 

 

      I understand that i'm poor ,

 

  I say i'm rich ,

I dream of going all around the world ,

    I try my best,

 

 I hope my dream's come true ,

I am the most fairest of them all . 

Author's Note

tell me what you think my opion I think it was cool and funny and cute

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love the randomness of this "i am" poem. It reminds me of the way our minds work, just throwing out random stuff at us all day long. I really like this one.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Cute! I hope your dreams come true! :-)

[MandaBear]

well done:)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write, I like the raw thought and feelings in this. Seems so simple yet... it's life too.
I like this part here a lot:
"I understand that i'm poor ,

I say i'm rich ,"

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Good to hold on to dreams and hope. When dreams are gone. We have become old. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Emerald Seas]

Our minds bounce around to all sorts of things. Sometimes I wonder if we're all not mad and it's only those that voice what is going on in their minds that are deemed 'crazy'

Funnier side.... I read this twice and I still came back to ADD and thinking... Squirrel!

[Lily Mae]

I love it because that is how my brain is wired lol.. :) well done:)