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A Poem by Nathaniel

Why dosent anyone explain to you
When your younger
What your supposed to do with your life?

The complications that come with life
Are sometimes so terrible
They make you want to end it

The exepctations
That are laid out for you
Taunt and tease you because they know you'll
Never be good enough

I want to live
I want to be me
I want to have my own dreams
I want to have my own life

But first I have to learn to live in reality.

© 2008 Nathaniel


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wow! this is like how i feel now. feeling that i dont know what i'm supposed to do with life, feeling that i'll never be able to live up to the expectations that everyone has you me. You found the words to express how some of us feel. great job!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This makes me want to cry. I don't know why. My mind works in strange ways that I don't understand.

"The exepctations
That are laid out for you
Taunt and tease you because they know you'll
Never be good enough"

This reminds me so much of the relationship between me and my dad. He thinks that I should be more intelligent like him. But I'm not and I never will be.

Great write.

~Brittany

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 24, 2008

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Nathaniel
Nathaniel

Hades, NC



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My name is Nathaniel Winston I am a senior at Millbrook High My secrete passion is that i love to write poetry Uh, anything else just ask. more..

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