Words

Thoughts sitting on my breath that

travel across

the sharp vibrations on the tip of my toungue

Words

They dress my mind and furnish my 

heart

build me up and break me down

Words

Articulate gesticulations, actions

kisses

hugs

winks

slaps

Words

are what you wish you wrote and 

spoke

happiness, sadness, tears

laughter

Words

are

words aren't

everything

are they nothing

They are you, and me

They are the beginning

And the end

Words

Author's Note

i wrote this one day on the train after work...tell me what you think

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Elegant and honest write!
Words can either make your day or destroy your day.words come from the heart and flow like lyrics in one's brain.
So, we need to be mentally active before we utter.
I have read several poems on Words but I guess this really speaks a lot.
Applauds...

[Jenny]

Thank you so much

I also feel like people take words too seriously. Then again some dont take them serious enough

A CONUNDRUM! ;)

Thank you for the review! I love them, good and bad. But this definitely put a smile on my face
J

[Dhaye]

Everything here is true about words. And lines are so powerful

[Jenny]

Thank you for the review :D

[Paul Bell]

I hope you got a seat on this train. Otherwise words may have been harsh. It's always the words you should have said that come to you later on. Don't you hate that.

[Jenny]

Yes I definitely had a seat that day. I fell asleep after I wrote this LOL

Sometimes I hate thinking that I couldve said something but its usually for the best that I dont hahahaha

[Jenny]

OH! and thank you so much for the review!

J

[Paul Bell]

You fall asleep again there. lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I would say the tone is what matters the most while uttering the words.. It all depends on the mood of the listener too as to how they take it.. Interesting train of thought here. I like the repitition. Really gives off a nice flow to it. Good work ☺

[Jenny]

thank you so much for the review! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! ☺

[Airtightparadox]

great how you keep using the word 'words' over and over again to give it extra power. beside that i especially like the paradoxes in the last paragraphs. 'words are everything, are they nothing?' and 'they are the beginning, and the end' . really strong writing to explain what words can do to a person

[Jenny]

YOU GET ME!!!! Thanks so much for the review!

[Jenny]

@Tony Jordan ...not sure why I couldn't comment on your review; but, thank you for reviewing! ...although i dont have a car so just the train ;)

J

[Chris]

I think you had one very thought-full ride after a very trying day... and you expressed your self very, very well.

[Jenny]

Thank you so much for your kind words!
J

[Chris]

I'm not a "kind" man Jen - just real. You thought-full-y expressed a tough point and the listening was good.

[Jenny]

kind words can come from anyone ;)

thank you so much for reviewing :)

[Valentine]

Nice thought out write. Where would we be if we couldn't use words to express our thoughts and feelings. Valentine

[Jenny]

I would certainly be lost ;)
Thanks so much for the review
J