This Story

This Story

A Poem by jennip
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a poem

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In this story made
of trees, I am
the unfalling leaf.

Woodsman chops old growth.
Deers rut. Still I refuse
to let go. It’s not

that I won’t. I have
no memory of falling,
of what waits below.

In this story
I never get beyond
once upon.
 

© 2008 jennip


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great poem- you're fun to read because your poems make me think.
clear, concise, great flow. thanks Z

Posted 16 Years Ago


Truly amazing stuff! You must be published. You are a true poet. Your ability is innate. For example, your use of enjambment... This can be taught, but only few can do it as effectively as you do it here.

"of trees, I am"

Perfection!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Greensboro, NC



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