Your Light has Shined the Brightest

Your Light has Shined the Brightest

A Poem by jennilouhoo
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A poem written for my dog when he passed. Written back in 2010.

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Your light has shined the brightest

Never before have I seen,

A flame so warm and comforting

Just as yours has been

 

Your endless, undying warmth

And your lively flickering around,

Will stay with me forever

Even though you are gone

 

Your light has shined the brightest

Until the very end

And even then you still

Held so much life

 

I wish that you were here with me

For just a few more glances

But like every great flame, there comes a time

For it to be extinguished

© 2012 jennilouhoo


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Nicely written

Posted 11 Years Ago


jennilouhoo

11 Years Ago

Thank You!
Acer

11 Years Ago

my pleasure
This is sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


jennilouhoo

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
So beautiful ... :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


jennilouhoo

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome . :)
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Aly
Beautiful. Beautifully written and beautifully said.
I love it. Very relateable. I love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


jennilouhoo

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Aly

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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Added on December 27, 2012
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Tags: Candle, Flame, Bright, Extinguished, Death, Missing

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I'm a girl in love with words and make believe. I guess that's why I love writing and acting so much. more..

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