You Make Me Feel

The way you make me feel:

Rain sliding down your window pain,

A new pair of shoes,

The breaking of a fast of life,

A tree blown in the wind.

 

Watching, feeling pain and hunger, bending,

Never breaking,

You still bring me beauty and joy.

That is how you make me feel.

Reviews

[....]

love the first stanza, deep. Very nicely written

[D. Pesek]

I like this. Short but powerful. Those are always nice, they prove that it doesn't take a lot of words to convey a message. well done.