#3

the leaves sigh gently
listening from shadows as
you speak my heart song

Reviews

[Crowley]

This style seems to suit you well, the ability to speak a tome in three lines shines....Nice stuff.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

I love it when you speak on the little things. I think that separates budding poets from the stagnant. When they can wrap phrases around one tiny thought. You, my dear, speak MY heart song, in poetry. *sigh*

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I find this intimacy to be the most true form of love.

[Ruth]

This is amazing! You return all to the pinnacle, as it should be :) xx

[Nobody.]

the wind mostly lies
and the leaves are just her slaves
sometimes, I am, too

hmm. heartsongs in the key of breezey sounds nice.

[Robin]

loooove this one