#2

shreds of winter ghosts
haunt the walls within my mind, 
when will you let go?

Reviews

[DivineButterfly85]

I like this poem, it leaves me thinking.

[Crowley]

As chapter 2 to the the first should be, a thread carried a story unfolding....

[JelliFyshKissUs]

I think you should calls these senryus. No Haikus I know send quivers up my spine with relatable life experiences. The most difficult stain to remove is the one that soaks into the mind. So true, senorita.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem has many meanings...but I couldnt help but be reminded of the theme of past sins being thrown as a stumbling block on the road to redemption....even though thats coming from wayyyy out of left field. lol

It also reminded me of a past love reemerging to reclaim the heart of a lover who has totally evolved into a new person.

[Ruth]

This is stark and well written.....I like the idea of the winter ghosts being shreds, beautiful! xx

[Nobody.]

just family photos
icy black remembrances
of when I was cold

very cool. this drew a strangely intriguing image in my mind.