I dig this a lot, darlin'. It's almost like small snippets of someone's personal diary more than it is someone "trying out" haikus. They all have a very deep personal feel to them that's haunting yet makes you long for them at the same time. Hopefully you carry on with these because I like where you're going with them. Love the idea of "Shreds of ghosts". I thought that was completely original and a great idea.
I dig this a lot, darlin'. It's almost like small snippets of someone's personal diary more than it is someone "trying out" haikus. They all have a very deep personal feel to them that's haunting yet makes you long for them at the same time. Hopefully you carry on with these because I like where you're going with them. Love the idea of "Shreds of ghosts". I thought that was completely original and a great idea.
Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..