The power of this piece is the understated, almost a through off, one complete sentence broken into 8 brief lines. Yet, it has a longer softness that lingers well after it's read. A very nifty piece of work with heart.
Perfectly worded! I love the connection between 'lines' and 'authored' and the tender feel of 'nestle'. An entire story told in 8 short lines. Excellent!
This type of milestone...I have never encountered before today. I know this isnt quite the point...but you made me think of widows and widowers as you explained how they can proclaim that they are not alone. You have truly opened my eyes...
wow...
I hope that the crying with pain lines around your eyes are not attributed to me....thats bullshit I tell you, pure bullshit! lol....sorry, I get so carried away. I loved this, how can you fit any more feeling into 19 words....loved this.
Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..