facial scripture.

hidden 
within the laugh lines
round my lips
and eyes
nestle
quite a few smiles
you alone 
have authored 

Reviews

[SparksLC]

This is really good, it's deep yet it gets to point =) Good job! I liked this.

[George Korolog]

The power of this piece is the understated, almost a through off, one complete sentence broken into 8 brief lines. Yet, it has a longer softness that lingers well after it's read. A very nifty piece of work with heart.

[emmajoy]

that's a poem a book long .. wonderful!

[Robin]

some of my best work , I must say :)

[Lilly Negoi]

this is simply exquisite :)

[Poeticadia]

Perfectly worded! I love the connection between 'lines' and 'authored' and the tender feel of 'nestle'. An entire story told in 8 short lines. Excellent!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This type of milestone...I have never encountered before today. I know this isnt quite the point...but you made me think of widows and widowers as you explained how they can proclaim that they are not alone. You have truly opened my eyes...
wow...

[Crowley]

I hope that the crying with pain lines around your eyes are not attributed to me....thats bullshit I tell you, pure bullshit! lol....sorry, I get so carried away. I loved this, how can you fit any more feeling into 19 words....loved this.

[Nobody.]

pure brilliance...this one! what an idea...what an image. beautiful!

[SpokenWord]

Ahhh now that is just beautiful :)