shellac these words to your soul.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

smile your fingers
round my softly silken throat
i want to drown in the feeling
of holding

© 2011 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

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Crowley

These words speak eclectic volumes, the creative use of words that normally wouldn't be used in certain contexts work wonderfully in this, mainly smile and drown....so cool. Belting out lifes realities in inviting subtext, you take it to a whole nother level...loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Robin

magique

Posted 13 Years Ago

Lilly Negoi

just perfect!!! "smile your fingers" - beautiful wording :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

c.m.	Oooo...I like this. Posted 13 Years Ago Oooo...I like this. Rating /100

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Added on April 25, 2011
Last Updated on April 25, 2011

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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada

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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..