a vow.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

let us be
as one breath
escaping
into the world
at large

© 2011 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

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DavidRyanM

I like this a lot. Simple and to the point. Packing a lot of power into such a small space. Seems like a quote that would be used at the beginning of a movie or a book. Dig it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OT	let us indeed!!! great little musing! nice! Posted 14 Years Ago let us indeed!!! great little musing! nice! Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

c.m.	Bravo...I believe we all wish this at one point...great job love. Posted 14 Years Ago Bravo...I believe we all wish this at one point...great job love. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robin

what mountain top did you write this one from ? *quiet reverence*

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 12, 2011
Last Updated on March 12, 2011

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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada

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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..