cafe.

drink down the sorrow

feel it coat your throat

like this bitter hot chocolate

your coffee girl forgot to add sugar to

Reviews

[Crowley]

lol....that godamn coffee girl. Feel my wrath! I know this isn't funny kit....but it struck me that way for a minute with that last line. Drinking life's bitter cup of sorrow and trying to drag your a*s out of bed each morning is a chore for sure. this has some overwhelming feeling for just four short lines.

[paul]

amazing the last line. somehow you've made something magical from the mundane

[SpokenWord]

That is a start to a bad day when your hot chocolate and life are both biter to the taste. I wonder what the coffee girl got tipped that morning. Very good write.

[An owl on the moon]

Life is so filled with flavors and colors, some bright lit and others dark and bitter. These lines, because one can relate to them immediately, provoke a depth of wisdom and a teaspoon of pain... How I wish life could always taste sweet, my friend.

[Isolophobe]

that is exactly how it tastes. an adequately bitter poem.

[OT]

ooo bitter and biting Jennie!! no sugar, heaven forbid haha! and the damn service too, jeez! nice!

[Robin]

I'm reading this from the coffee girls perspective , smells like she stirred in some regret ...

[J.Black]

People usually think they can gulp down the negative bitter things- but it's never the case! Unless it's sweetened up and coated with bullshit, it won't slide easily. Well done JW!

[The Analog Kid]

Nice and brief, yet effective. Life. Take it straight up, no coffee and no sugar. Real bitter bite:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes the truth is hard to swallow but when we listen it will always makes us better people. Nicely done.