porthole universes.

porthole universes.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

come,
step
willingly
inside...
the brass ring 
will hold you safe
just long enough 
to anticipate 
the free fall

© 2011 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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Seems a happening in the making .. with whatever consequences

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was deep...and very interesting. Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this made me smile....every word is perfectly placed...that last line really lights the fuse. kicks a*s!
Cheers!
Tall One ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As long as the landing isn't to abrupt....lol. This one has legs, an unending supply of possibilities.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, i remember that sign at the beginning...it didn't mention the pothole universes...but, there it is

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an ethereal mystery here

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think i fell through the looking glass ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 22, 2011
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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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