porthole universes.
A Poem by
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
come,
step
willingly
inside...
the brass ring
will hold you safe
just long enough
to anticipate
the free fall
© 2011 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
Reviews
Seems a happening in the making .. with whatever consequences
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was deep...and very interesting. Nice write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was deep...and very interesting. Nice write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
this made me smile....every word is perfectly placed...that last line really lights the fuse. kicks a*s!
Cheers!
Tall One ;)
Posted 13 Years Ago
this made me smile....every word is perfectly placed...that last line really lights the fuse. kicks ass!
Cheers!
Tall One ;)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
As long as the landing isn't to abrupt....lol. This one has legs, an unending supply of possibilities.
Posted 13 Years Ago
As long as the landing isn't to abrupt....lol. This one has legs, an unending supply of possibilities.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
yes, i remember that sign at the beginning...it didn't mention the pothole universes...but, there it is
Posted 13 Years Ago
yes, i remember that sign at the beginning...it didn't mention the pothole universes...but, there it is
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
an ethereal mystery here
Posted 13 Years Ago
an ethereal mystery here
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I think i fell through the looking glass ...
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think i fell through the looking glass ...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 22, 2011
Last Updated on January 22, 2011
Author
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman) Vancouver, BC, Canada
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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, ..
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