thrum.

thrum.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

a hum
a sound
a reverb needle 
set to max
a thousand voracious dragons 
purring throatily 
in deepset glee
as tightly wound tattoo needles
score the curls of my brain
with avidly ratcheted inkwork

© 2011 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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Owwwwwwwww!!!!!! Thats what it was like when getting that celtic cross wasn't it? How did I miss this, I have been a bad cowboy....punishment time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i used to take that stuff, but i'd rather sit down and relax...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you ever watch a loom , clicking, whirling , bobbins spinning .. you sit there long enough and you hear the music , I always hear the music in your poetry

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cool. love the dragons reference. and tattoo needles inking your brain.
brilliant

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honestly, I am not stalking you.....
I just saw this on my homepage 3 seconds after it was posted.

For some reason this poem reminds me of a good metal song, but also of a string quartet.
That's pretty good, kiddo.




Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 4, 2011
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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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