home.

you speak 

the syllables 

of my heart 

so softly 

the cooing birds

who hide in the rafters

pause 

in their comfort

to listen

Reviews

[Nobody.]

Nice. it makes me feel peaceful, but slightly alarmed. the eyes of birds peeking into such an intimate moment.....eavesdropping. nosey little freaks! or would a nosy bird be called beaky? hmmm. ;D
good short. love it.
cheers!

[Shaun Rudie]

I found some peace reading this. Very nice

[Tony]

And they do, don't they?
I'm a little homesick now.

[Robin]

what a beautiful sound ~