virtuoso.

virtuoso.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

you always know
how to place
your fingertips
on the fevered pulsepoints
of my soul

your touch cools the fires
inhabiting my daily existence
like water poured
upon over-sunned flagstones

© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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Superb compression of words. Fine gems, carefully selected, manifesting InnerFeeling.
Language is only the impression of what is shared. Beneath the words, for the hungry minds and hearts of your audience, appears the Artist, her passion, the smell of her smoke as it rises from the coals of existence.
In this writer's words, feel the cool texture of diamonds in your palm, what is a view from another's soul.
Oh, Jenniewren...
So beautiful within your skin.
It is so very easy to catch you writing poems that stick.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Your words are absolutely stunning.
This is perfection. This is the bond
we all dream of.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

At first read, I thought this was really romantic. A strong love that could never be extinguished. Then I read it again, and it was completely erotic. I loved it either way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ah, to stand in front of the shower of your words...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

passionate..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) nice.....steamy and just grrrrrrr!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I so love your style ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Virtuoso.
One of my very favorite words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Superb compression of words. Fine gems, carefully selected, manifesting InnerFeeling.
Language is only the impression of what is shared. Beneath the words, for the hungry minds and hearts of your audience, appears the Artist, her passion, the smell of her smoke as it rises from the coals of existence.
In this writer's words, feel the cool texture of diamonds in your palm, what is a view from another's soul.
Oh, Jenniewren...
So beautiful within your skin.
It is so very easy to catch you writing poems that stick.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Someone plays you like the grandest of pianos then? Oh to be that virtuoso...this was splendid and pointed. Good to see you about again....days without your poetry are hardly the days that days could be. Great job......

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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