Superb compression of words. Fine gems, carefully selected, manifesting InnerFeeling.
Language is only the impression of what is shared. Beneath the words, for the hungry minds and hearts of your audience, appears the Artist, her passion, the smell of her smoke as it rises from the coals of existence.
In this writer's words, feel the cool texture of diamonds in your palm, what is a view from another's soul.
Oh, Jenniewren...
So beautiful within your skin.
It is so very easy to catch you writing poems that stick.
At first read, I thought this was really romantic. A strong love that could never be extinguished. Then I read it again, and it was completely erotic. I loved it either way.
Superb compression of words. Fine gems, carefully selected, manifesting InnerFeeling.
Language is only the impression of what is shared. Beneath the words, for the hungry minds and hearts of your audience, appears the Artist, her passion, the smell of her smoke as it rises from the coals of existence.
In this writer's words, feel the cool texture of diamonds in your palm, what is a view from another's soul.
Oh, Jenniewren...
So beautiful within your skin.
It is so very easy to catch you writing poems that stick.
Someone plays you like the grandest of pianos then? Oh to be that virtuoso...this was splendid and pointed. Good to see you about again....days without your poetry are hardly the days that days could be. Great job......
Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..