when ninja moves fail.

when ninja moves fail.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

she sidestepped the slip
and deked the tumble
but forgot 
in her smugness
to look up
for the falling piano

© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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Haha! Interestingly humorous. I'd like to know the inspiration for this poem. Well done. I like how you separated the lines, building upon each action with another idea that broaden's the reader's perspective.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

be aware , very aware ..

and look out for the Bus ..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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