tenacity.
A Poem by
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
survival of the fittest
is a phrase they always use
and while it's true i survived
i am battle-scarred
broken
dogeared, tired
a crumpled velveteen kitten
whose nose was rubbed off
long ago
© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
Featured Review
amen.
I am a raggedy sock puppet missing it's button eyes.
"life can be negotiated in smooth elbow brushes
survival will always leave scars"
Native American Saying (Cherokee I think)
this is honest and beautiful and slapped me right in the mouth.
I love it.
cheers!
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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dogeared, tired
a crumpled velveteen kitten..
aw..i have felt like that..well expressed..
Posted 14 Years Ago
dogeared, tired
a crumpled velveteen kitten..
aw..i have felt like that..well expressed..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I have a wash machine, a needle and thread and half a dozen ibuprofen....that will work until we can go shopping and get to a spa....the tone of this one is tired and overwhelmed makes me sad reading it really. We all have our battle wounds, its the battles waged and lost in the mind that are the important ones....thought provoking write kitten.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I have a wash machine, a needle and thread and half a dozen ibuprofen....that will work until we can go shopping and get to a spa....the tone of this one is tired and overwhelmed makes me sad reading it really. We all have our battle wounds, its the battles waged and lost in the mind that are the important ones....thought provoking write kitten.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
amen.
I am a raggedy sock puppet missing it's button eyes.
"life can be negotiated in smooth elbow brushes
survival will always leave scars"
Native American Saying (Cherokee I think)
this is honest and beautiful and slapped me right in the mouth.
I love it.
cheers!
Posted 14 Years Ago
amen.
I am a raggedy sock puppet missing it's button eyes.
"life can be negotiated in smooth elbow brushes
survival will always leave scars"
Native American Saying (Cherokee I think)
this is honest and beautiful and slapped me right in the mouth.
I love it.
cheers!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
"whose nose was rubbed off" ~ sharp metaphor
Posted 14 Years Ago
"whose nose was rubbed off" ~ sharp metaphor
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
dogeared - beautiful
Posted 14 Years Ago
dogeared - beautiful
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 7, 2010
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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman) Vancouver, BC, Canada
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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, ..
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