Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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tenacity.

tenacity.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

survival of the fittest
is a phrase they always use
and while it's true i survived
i am battle-scarred 
broken
dogeared, tired
a crumpled velveteen kitten
whose nose was rubbed off
long ago

© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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amen.
I am a raggedy sock puppet missing it's button eyes.


"life can be negotiated in smooth elbow brushes
survival will always leave scars"
Native American Saying (Cherokee I think)

this is honest and beautiful and slapped me right in the mouth.

I love it.

cheers!



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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dogeared, tired

a crumpled velveteen kitten..
aw..i have felt like that..well expressed..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have a wash machine, a needle and thread and half a dozen ibuprofen....that will work until we can go shopping and get to a spa....the tone of this one is tired and overwhelmed makes me sad reading it really. We all have our battle wounds, its the battles waged and lost in the mind that are the important ones....thought provoking write kitten.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amen.
I am a raggedy sock puppet missing it's button eyes.


"life can be negotiated in smooth elbow brushes
survival will always leave scars"
Native American Saying (Cherokee I think)

this is honest and beautiful and slapped me right in the mouth.

I love it.

cheers!



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"whose nose was rubbed off" ~ sharp metaphor


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dogeared - beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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