ghost.
A Poem by
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
i can still smell
the scent of
your desire
in my hair
even though
the desire left
many shampoos ago
© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
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Clever,succinct and full of yearning...
Posted 13 Years Ago
many shampoos ago - excellent
great title too
Posted 13 Years Ago
many shampoos ago - excellent
great title too
oh, what cunning little words
Posted 13 Years Ago
oh, what cunning little words
Beautiful write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful write.
poetry like this deserves a hug more than words ~
Posted 13 Years Ago
poetry like this deserves a hug more than words ~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
memory pervades our hearts, and echoes through our senses
Posted 13 Years Ago
memory pervades our hearts, and echoes through our senses
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
lol.....I told you to use conditioner...It locks in the desire!!!!! Funny and sad at the same time, couldn't resist. Sorry I know this is not a funny piece....just hoped you could use a laugh (or maybe I'm not that funny anyway).
Posted 13 Years Ago
lol.....I told you to use conditioner...It locks in the desire!!!!! Funny and sad at the same time, couldn't resist. Sorry I know this is not a funny piece....just hoped you could use a laugh (or maybe I'm not that funny anyway).
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 6, 2010
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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman) Vancouver, BC, Canada
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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, ..
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