ghost.

ghost.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

i can still smell
the scent of 
your desire
in my hair
even though
the desire left
many shampoos ago

© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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Clever,succinct and full of yearning...

Posted 13 Years Ago


many shampoos ago - excellent

great title too

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh, what cunning little words

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


poetry like this deserves a hug more than words ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

memory pervades our hearts, and echoes through our senses

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol.....I told you to use conditioner...It locks in the desire!!!!! Funny and sad at the same time, couldn't resist. Sorry I know this is not a funny piece....just hoped you could use a laugh (or maybe I'm not that funny anyway).

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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