insufficient.

beautiful 

is not 

the thought i see

in your eyes, 

when you 

look 

at me

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

I have never read any poem before where a single 'not' made so much of difference.You pack in so much in such few words..such profound sentiments..

[Alicia Schroeder]

Great peice

[Robin]

you have gentle directness in matters of the heart

[Tony]

Maybe. but I am still writing a song about you.
In Aminor.

I compress and I compress, review and compress....still, I cannot get these great pictures small enough to fit in my pocket.
Like jenniewren does.

Oh, and 'Sliver'......
The Best.