parched.

go ahead

try 

to drain the dregs

of my soul

you might think

you've already reached 

the sandy bottom

but you'd be wrong

there's always 

a deeper hidden pool

to gain your nourishment from

and your lips are never those

i'd refuse to succour 

Reviews

[Nobody.]

delightfully perverse tone on this one. long lovely metaphor for the 'one more time' button that comes with human nature....for some reason I could hear Janis Joplin singing,
"Take it!
Take another little piece of my heart now baby."

great poem.

[J.Black]

Resisting love! ... next time they ask to kiss you, hand them a glass of cold water.

[Periac]

hmmm....i should have learned to scuba dive

[Crowley]

lol.....thee are no dregs in your soul Girly Q. I think a man would have to have all of the rope in the world just to dip one toe in those succulent waters, and then it would be like Dogma....the part where if we heard what God sounded like we would die......."Wrengirl and the Technicolor Soul Coat"....you write like the wind....

[Ed Hart]

well, well, well...think i'll just slip in here for a cool dip