spotless.

if i should hurt you

enough 

that you would

eradicate my shadow

from your life

could you love me

enough 

that you would

want to colour me 

back in?

just...

remember.

Reviews

[Periac]

here is a perfect example fear

[Devons]

Poignant seems to be the classic reviewer's superlative. It is one of the best words there is and looks fine too. It gets overused somewhat -even by me- but its glory is justified.
Poignant.
A lovely exposure of a metaphor in context of imagery and meaning.
And, in all seriousness, beautifully poignant.

[Crowley]

Where is that 64 box of crayons with the sharpner....what color would you like to be? Cool structure with the shading and all, and sad subject matter maybe.....Superb as always...

[Ed Hart]

this is why they teach us not to play with fire, or knives

[Robin]

this has that classical Jennie twist .. lots of oooh factor

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Nope, I couldn't.
A brilliant image of the dysfunctional dance of relationships. Blotting out, colouring back in. Superb.

"to colour me back in" Love it.