the ground that we stand on.

sleepyfaced boy

locked inside the lines of a man

fit your unyielding angles

along my aching curves

there's comfort here

to be taken

and a home waiting

for the lights to be turned on inside

Reviews

[Crowley]

How in the hell did I miss this.....bad Corey san...bad bad Corey san. Takes my heart out and plays with it, rolling it around in warm soft fingers, never at risk for stopping beating, instead growing stronger and bigger. Time to put it back in my chest...now where is that damn key......Great song.

[Nobody.]

Nicely done. pulled me into the dreamy feel and struck me with familiarity of ache and the need for honest connection.

[DavidRyanM]

I love the imagery of this one, dear. The way you play with words and manipulate them to do your bidding is great.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

'for the light to be turned on inside'..:)

[Tony]

Stirring........

[Robin]

I always like the possibilities of beginnings

[Ed Hart]

at the beginning of the race, the starter will call out, "aching curves"!

[miSS LEaf]

very homie...... :) i like your poems because they give just enough nuance, and the rest continues in my imagination