inconsequential.

dying in slow halfmoments:

aching away 

each untouched night

pushing away 

each unkissed morn

my sandcastle walls

lapped away

grain after grain

by a relentless tide of dismissal

Reviews

[Nobody.]

wow. this cut me deep somehow. I think it tapped into an old feeling I must have tucked down somewhere. Just a brilliant expression of the ache. really well done.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

sandcastle walls..yes..
i know the feeling..
you will always be my favorite writer..

[Ed Hart]

which of us doesn't know how to divide moments into lonely parts

[Crowley]

Those grains just get carried to another place, a new place, on the beach in Costa Rica. I hear you can find temporary happiness there, but you will have to look to yourself to make it permanent. Wow you are sad today....its good for your writing.

[Robin]

if dictionaries ever need to define the feeling behind a word this one has my vote ~