broken syllables.

a hand emptied

a kiss withdrawn

an embrace unfolded

it was my fault

i should've been satisfied

with the holding

and never asked for more

i'll know better

next time

Reviews

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This is so sad, feelings are so well expressed.

[Nobody.]

wow. stark and honest piece. I love that last little bit...really drives the nail in deep. amazing piece as usual.
cheers!

[Crowley]

Ouch....does it hurt when I do this.....unbearably sad, I am left doubled over and gasping for air. Harsh and well written.

[Robin]

it is difficult when the each heart is listening to a different song .
you are a master of tone ~

[bluessadmood]

yes one should not be greedy ,a hand touching
a kiss sending you to heavens
or an embrace giving you all warmth and feeling safe
what more could i want..i could easily satisfy with just one..ha ha
lovely write..