A lovely writing with that tranquil gentleness i have come to associate you with..i love the format..
Life comes to sing the most beautiful notes in these pauses..we are one with the pristine cycle of our own breathing entwined with desire,yearning,disgust..all and everything entwined in that tenderness.
I love the structure of this. I read the the one part as the title, and the indented paragraph as fast as I could, only slowing down to slowly read the titles. Well done, dear. "The darkness of my hermitage" is a brilliant way to say that. I envy that line a lot.
Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..