hiding in your closet.

hiding in your closet.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


if you'll let me
i will clothe you with my love
no need to match your skin tone
with the seasons
because all my colours
will look good on you
and could never
fall out of style

© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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Ach, what a absolutely delightful little fantasy this launches. I will open my closet with a new sense of purpose tonight, though my sudden and uncharacteristic passion for hanging things up neatly might arouse suspicion ... especially if I kept stepping into the closet ... The title also makes me think that I am hiding in my own writing closet...the coming out from which may prove more difficult and less rewarding.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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*blush*

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I adore the seasonal slant here too:) The "fall out of style" fits so well with the colours and season!
Beautifully written love!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice pieces. small little gems which hit you like heavy gravity. You are quite the word surgeon.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderfully expressed in atypical jennie-san fashion

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh, jenniewren, the men waiting in line to hear these words stretch beyond the horizon

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ach, what a absolutely delightful little fantasy this launches. I will open my closet with a new sense of purpose tonight, though my sudden and uncharacteristic passion for hanging things up neatly might arouse suspicion ... especially if I kept stepping into the closet ... The title also makes me think that I am hiding in my own writing closet...the coming out from which may prove more difficult and less rewarding.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like a favorite pair of jeans....I am sure you would be an indispensable fashion accessory for the love of your life. In my case hopefully you would come with a stretchy waistband...lol. This was adorable and moving...great work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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