secret smile.

questing fingers

reaching across a lifetime 

aching smiles 

tracing the curves of a long lost soul

glancing stares 

flickering fevered semaphore words 

dreaming hearts

tabulating the worth of a kindred spirit

and finding the value incalculable

Reviews

[Michael X]

bravo.. this is passionate, i loved the way you emphasize the intellectual
emotions of romance, the heart is woven into the fabric of the meaning,
the calculated imagery, questing, aching, glancing, dreaming, adding to
and incalcuable worth, such insight leaves the reader seeing colors of wonder

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

aching smiles tracing the curves of a long lost soul..those words said it all :)..succinct and so very beautiful,the depth of the meaning here surpasses the length.

some really incredible word pairings, semaphore words...im jealous lol

[paul]

opening is beautiful... wow, wow, wow... this poem is heaven sent and moving
expressing : universal longing... magical joy grief... memories... the magic of communication... angels doing math ... and the miracle of love...
thanks for reminding me of all these things... and more... in this magic little poem.

[Moonflower]

This is stunning. :)

[DavidRyanM]

Beautifully written, dear. Your control with words and how you use them is beyond belief. Well done.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Whew! This was steamy. It made my skin crawl.
Sensual enough to make you feel guilty as you read
along, but spoken with elegance. Beauty!

[R J Askew]

Love 'semaphore words' and 'finding the value incalculable'.

[Ed Hart]

you see, you couldn't write this if you didn't know it, and that makes your value, incalculable

[Robin]

this poetry may have more meaning to me, maybe than you jennie-san