something magic.

the deepest magic is this:

when my heart beats

i feel the echo

of yours

responding

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Bloody hell! And there I was thinking they were just pumps! Actually, I find it hard to think of them as pumps and as poetic love hearts. When you think about it our hearts are absolutely astonishing. I mean how the hell can we depend on something so ... And how the hell does the heart KNOW how to beat? Where the hell did all this start that led us to this? B-DUM-B-DUM-B-DUM-BEEEE-DUM

[celyn]

so much said in so few words. you have talent to spare it seems.

[melissa]

short and sweet:)

[JC]

lucky man.

[Ed Hart]

you bet

[Crowley]

The deepest love is this:

When my heart stops
You are the first one
To pull out the paddles and yell
Clear.......

This is perfect, nice work. You have been quite prolific as of late.

[paul]

another beauty. magical. deep magic : indeed!
great title too.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Ah!!..and there you go again Jennie..weaving magic..
Ain't that feeling wonderful..this made me smile...

[Robin]

that is magic