wolf.

lost to triggerhappy glances of command, compulsions meted out with violent hunger

i'm held, transfixed by the obeisance i've given before the movement is registered

my sudden lamb-like demeanor quells my rebellion, weakens my knees

a lifetime's freedom, gone the moment i fell for pearly whites in wolfie grins

a trap sprung, a facade as innocent as an angel's upcurled lip, delicious subjugation

(though, were i to be honest, i sensed the brushcomb tail lurking in your kisses and

leapt into the fray, hoping for the sensation of teeth rending flesh given in supplication

but since have come to know my own secret lupine hunger cavorting as a lamb, 

tempting prey for a voracious devourer such as yourself, too appealing to resist

hunter and quarry, you are the prize and the damnation i so eagerly require)

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This is devorously stunnigly sensual ..oh much much more than just sensual actually.'Tempting prey fora voracious devourer such as yourself'.You capture that willing sexual submission well...this was so fast paced,it was almost like getting sucked into a whirlwind it left behind a smile nevertheless.

[Nobody.]

this had all my senses tingling. I think this is my favorite of yours so far. You kick poetic a*s!
cheers!

[alan peter kelly]

when the lamb is aware of the wolf...the lamb is no longer a lamb...we make our choices and clean up our own mess...willing subjugation / supplication is the only way to die...

[JC]

god damn....you verbiaged(makin up words now...weird mood...too much caffeine) a hot little number here, the poem is like a wolf in sheeps clothing itself...so much passion and fierce desire in there..

[Robin]

I like the pace of this one, I imagine an open mic night you in the spot light rockin' the house .

[R J Askew]

Ach, I wish, I wish, I wish I had such a 'brushcome tail' o I wish! I'd call it Byron and wave it shamelessly. (I also wonder what types of poems wolves wld write about us, were they able to -- so come on Wolves, get writing!)

[Kyle Insane]

heavy petting.

;)

[Crowley]

Woof....that was excellent, I could see someone reading to themselves under their own breath, a kind of monologue for my personal well being. One thing though...it is important that your coat be shiny and your nails neatly trimmed and tucked, only bring them out when you have the bare back neatly exposed to carve your initials into.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem makes me frustrated! Why can't humans with all of their intelligence seem to stay away from the ones who are bad news? lol. This is exactly why guys love the girlz-n-gunz movies. lol.

You wrote this poem with elegance..wit and charm. This is probably the most obscene non sexual thing I've ever written. It feels erotic. The ability to write with such passion is a red flag for guys to stay away..right there. But, look.. theres already two of us. lol. Your Regal finish is as glossy as ever.

[Ed Hart]

yea, the worthwhile girls are like that