piano blink.

close my eyes

twirl

arms outspread

holding onto the air to catch me

twirl

spinningdervishjenniegirl

twirl

twirl til the world dissolves

and the horizon tilts

twirl til my world makes sense

it can all only get better from here

Reviews

[Nobody.]

sometimes one must 'twirl' until things change. I love when you compress words like that...brings the child to the surface.
cheers!

[Rory CJ Frankson]

spinningdervishjenniegirl... this is cool

[Tony]

I have always loved to escape equilibrium....
.... spinningdervishjenniegirl twirl....
I feel an urge to try that right now....
I better go outside.

[alan peter kelly]

you think? one can only hope (ha ha) keep twirling jenniewren

[Robin]

"spinningdervishjenniegirl " yep , don't blink

[Crowley]

My favorite of the bunch so far....spinningdervishjenniegirl...I love it.

[Ed Hart]

you have a way of saying your heart that dances and sparkles and sings

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet poem. It has a childlike quality to it all.
I found an innocence that is lost on the way to adulthood.
Its beautiful that the child can come back to save the woman.