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A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

        sometimes, 
             life is meant to be lived 
         without the big WHAT IF 
    ready to drop on your head 
like an itinerant flying piano 
who’s lost its wings..

© 2010 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)


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Ha ha, I would read this poem right now, see how things work. ummmm.. maybe I was meant to read this. I guess focusing on things that don't really exist will affect our very existence as we give power to the non existent just by thinking about it. I really like your words of wisdom. Nice :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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lol.....what a visual...Laural and Hardy jut came to mind for some reason....the piano thing. When reaching into our bags of analogies, sometimes we find one that was caught in the folds of the bag and has been lost and works so perfectly. this is one of those. Loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


"life is meant to be lived
without the big WHAT IF"
awesome!!!---and so true!!!
I love this!!!

james:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes, what if, we did?

And also, what if, we didn't?

We just never can get away from that darn question can we?

Love this Jennie!
Antonio xx


Posted 14 Years Ago


I am surprised you haven't said to hell with it and moved to a third world country for the freedom.
That's how I escaped the WHAT IF.
You a seer. For real.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ha ha, I would read this poem right now, see how things work. ummmm.. maybe I was meant to read this. I guess focusing on things that don't really exist will affect our very existence as we give power to the non existent just by thinking about it. I really like your words of wisdom. Nice :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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Playful and eager to explore new styles of writing, and to hone my skills. i'm reaching a point now where i can write a poem and be able to say that it is something i really like. I'm an avid reader, .. more..

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