what gretel never knew.

what gretel never knew

before

but was to soon find out:

is each hard-won breadcrumb

the prize she'd sought to gain,

or what her journey's brought about?

Reviews

[Jonathan Ballam]

Short, mischievous and thought-provoking. It makes me re-think the way those nursery rhymes were taught, to us ;)

[J.Black]

Short, yet serves its justice. Well done JW! You're quite clever!

[Ed Hart]

in the woods, when it's getting dark, it's hard to tell if it's a bread crumb, or maybe something else...we eat a lot of s**t on the way to knowledge

[miSS LEaf]

childhood stories have shown us that simple words can hold so much knowledge~ some children will grow to find out, some will not~ interesting theme, Jenn :)

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Brief and touching..very wise words jennie and cleverly said..

[Iota]

This is why I say with time comes wisdom, maybe one day Gretel will know. :) Short but nice write ~