Cloud Gathering

the beats create your form

your smile bouncing within the notes

giving off lighthearted joy

in sonic waves

 

yet in quiet times

i sense your inner stillness

like a pause between the pulse

a backbeat hidden in the brightness

revealing to me

the song of you

that yearns for completion

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh God this is so beautiful..really I cant stand so much beauty,ha ha
everything I see create who you are,I see a smile within those words
A lighthearted joy..but at times I feel inner stillness,like a pause between a pulse
something hidden and bright reveals to me the song of you,that yearns for completion
What loveliness..this is magic for sure,ha ha
lovely write..

[Taunt-gently]

Well isnt this beautiful... Grabs it reads it again, folds it in quarters and pops in the pocket and heads off on their way.

[deeps]

This is a beuatiful write here
Touching quite really...Kim Travis