Small Eternities

i dream

of a palm

held out

in warm welcome

waiting for

the touch of mine

Reviews

[fireblossom]

I dearly love short deep poems. I loved this poem. There are so many dimensions here - longing, the desire for peace and brotherhood - a worldwide need.

Well written.

[William]

[Taunt-gently]

Yes those dreams make me want to sleep forever. Oneday.

[R J Askew]

A fine wee job. How many millions can cld nod their heads in agreement. You have the knack of saying much with great economy.

[Wildfleour]

Yes, sometimes it can feel that way. Other times it is an eternity until I have a moment to myself! :)

[deeps]

Short and to the point
And most of all most lovely write